October 19, 2004

“ODYSSEUS’S SCAR”: WHO’S ZOOMIN’ WHO? Next section of the science-fiction-twin spy story. In which David Malone gets a very unwelcome head check. Plotness ensues.

Sorry for the delay. Should finish story… well… either tomorrow or Thursday. Here for story so far, here for most recent section.

Strong language, weak wills, ressentiment, and many other things that would, in a more confident age, have landed this story on the Index. Enter at own risk. If this were on TV, it would have to be on cable. And it would have a lot less internal monologue, too. (I hope.)

If you feel so moved, I’d love to know what you’re liking, hating, or puzzling over with this story, so email away. I am nigh-impossible to irk or offend when it comes to critiquing my fiction.


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