Hey, God, That Wasn’t a Bad First Draft, but…

Mike Lacher offers God some feedback on the Creation of the world:

9 — Re: “mankind.” Interesting take on the brief here. Big pain point is that mankind is coming across as largely made in your image. As you hopefully recall from the deck, our users are a diverse group (slide twenty-seven) and we definitely want to make them feel represented (slide twenty-eight). Afraid that if our users see fleshy bipedal mammals positioned as “ruling over” the ground and sea (if we’re having sea), they might feel alienated and again less willing to convert into brand evangelists. Let’s fast-track an alt version with mankind removed. Doable?

There’s a lot more feedback where that came from. Check out the full list.

(via McSweeney’s. Image via Shutterstock)

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