Having encouraged people to tear other Christian-film-reviews to pieces with their editing cutlery, I should put myself on the operating table as well. I do this to emphasize that I’m interested in better writing, not in belittling other review writers.
Feel free to post any comments on what you would do to improve the review. I’m likely to take your advice next time I have a chance to sit down and improve it (which may not be until this weekend, when I can go home and find a few minutes at my desk.)
If I don’t see comments being posted, I’ll assume that somehow, in my twenty minutes at the computer last night, I actually produced something readable.