Having encouraged people to tear other Christian-film-reviews to pieces with their editing cutlery, I should put myself on the operating table as well. I do this to emphasize that I’m interested in better writing, not in belittling other review writers.
So, here is a somewhat-hurriedly written review of James Redford’s “Spin.”
Feel free to post any comments on what you would do to improve the review. I’m likely to take your advice next time I have a chance to sit down and improve it (which may not be until this weekend, when I can go home and find a few minutes at my desk.)
If I don’t see comments being posted, I’ll assume that somehow, in my twenty minutes at the computer last night, I actually produced something readable.