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Is It Boredom That Drives Them?

I feel bad for Jean Torkelson, she obviously didn’t want to write a filler piece about modern Pagans celebrating the Summer solstice for Rocky Mountain News. This woman is well-educated veteran of the religion-beat and most likely frustrated with her lot. Why else would she write the article in the manner she did?

She starts off fine.

“A rustle of wind, the glow of a fire pit, and a lingering dusk that coaxed night from the longest day of the year – last week marked the summer solstice, a magical time for scores of Colorado’s witches’ covens.”

But every nice phrase is married to an embarrassing gaff or diminishing factoid. It becomes clear she wasn’t impressed and wished to convey that to her readers.

“…intoned Will Christy, 46, known at his King Soopers checkout job for his thick, lush ponytail and pagan necklace…the coven’s high-priest, Richard Cornelius, who sported a ritual saber slung at the side of his khaki shorts…Despite being a high priest, he has a laid-back, Clark Kent demeanor…”

The whole article ends with her description of a prank played during the evening, but the real prank seems to be on the coven who trusted the reporter to treat their ritual with some measure of respect. Torkelson doesn’t seem particularly malicious, so was it boredom? Snobbishness? Lazy writing? Whatever the reason this should be a message to the editors to take her off the Pagan beat before her snark turns to anger.

One response so far

  • Eden

    Having lived in NE Colorado for a year, I was pleasantly surprised at the tolerance levels there. The local PBS channel ran back-to-back documentaries on Wicca & neopaganism … during pledge weeks! So there must be interest and/or demand for information. Plus Isis Books & Gifts is out of Denver.As a writer, I also found the piece snarky in its tone and the writer lazy in her approach. For example, she flippantly mentions Wiccan, pagan, etc. and then says she can’t be bothered defining or differentiating the terms. And so her point was…?Yet another piece where we come off looking like freaks b/c a reporter can’t be bothered with the story behind the story.