Commonwealth, II.XXIV: The Remainers

Commonwealth, II.XXIV: The Remainers January 15, 2021

Commonwealth: A Novel of Utopia, part 2, chapter 4

Author’s Note: This is an excerpt from my novel Commonwealth. The rest of today’s installment is free, but only on my Patreon site. If you want to read the next part today, it’s already up on Patreon as well. You can sign up for as little as $1/month, or $2 for exclusive author’s notes and behind-the-scenes material. There’s also a table of contents for all published chapters.

Will smiled ironically.

“There was another factor to consider. My job developing weapons for the U.S. government meant I had to carry a very high-level security clearance. I had – still have – access to more of their secrets than any other civilian. They’re perpetually paranoid that I might reveal those secrets for the right price, or that I might betray them in some other way. And we know they’re right to worry, though the real motivation wouldn’t have entered into their wildest fantasies.

“To forestall that possibility, they kept close tabs on me. On my movements and my communications. I was often under surveillance, and I had to carefully choose who I approached so my behavior wasn’t deemed suspicious. As an old boyfriend, I had a reason to talk to you. If my pursuit of you seemed… excessive, my handlers would have assumed the same thing you did – that I wanted to rekindle our relationship. Such self-serving motives are familiar to them. But I couldn’t tell you the truth about the Pacific Republic in a public place, in case they were listening in.”

Rae sat and digested this. She couldn’t find any fault with it, and that alone made her frustrated and angry. But then she spotted the flaw.

“But you weren’t always a big-deal weapons merchant. Why didn’t you tell me about the Pacific Republic the day they approached you? Before you started your company, before we broke up… before this bad blood that got between us. Why didn’t you let me in on the big secret from the beginning?”

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