I’ve been asked by a member of the Commission on Appraisal who first opined that Section C-2.3, “Sources,” needs a conclusion, and so wanted to know what I thought a suitable ending sentence might look like if they deleted what I’ve said is an unacceptable sentence.
That original sentence reads:
“Grateful for the traditions that have strengthened our own, we strive to avoid misappropriation of cultural and religious practices and to seek ways of appreciation that are respectful and welcomed.”
I have summarized my opinions regarding this term and why I am strongly insistent that it be removed from the document in my immediately preceding blog post.
In response to the question my best thought is replacing that sentence with something along the following lines.
“Grateful for the traditions that have strengthened our own, we strive to engage them with humility and respect.”
I believe that’s the point.
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