Everybody say it together: All news is local. Actually, all news is becoming hyper-local, but that’s another issue.
So what are the obvious local stories linked to Egypt?
Several leap to mind. Are there any local citizens, businesspeople and or study-abroad students who are in Egypt? Are they trapped? The other natural story is the flip side of that coin: Does our city or region include institutions that primarily appeal to Egyptians? The other day, the Baltimore Sun did the logical thing and sent a reporter out to a Coptic Orthodox parish. After all, it’s not that hard to find Coptic believers of various kinds in major American cities.
Now, the Washington Post has served up another story linked to the events in Egypt, one with a solid and logical local news hook. Here’s the top of the story:
For days, people have been congratulating Eman Lotfy, a 24-year-old immigrant from Egypt, on her homeland’s uprising.
“I hope your revolution never ends,” declared a Sudanese woman who came in to Lotfy’s family-owned establishment, the Cairo Cafe, in Alexandria (Virginia, not Egypt).
The cafe’s television has been on constantly, flipping between Arabic-language news stations as rapt patrons from across the Arab world sucked on hookahs and excitedly debated whether their own country would be next. … But it’s one thing to cheer a revolution from the sidelines. It’s something else to have the flames licking at your front door.
For Lotfy, whose family moved here from Egypt more than a decade ago, the chaos has been more frightening than inspiring.
“Everyone’s depressed. People are crying, seeing Cairo on fire,” she said. “Alexandria is a disaster. … I have people saying ‘Congratulations on your country,’ which really amazes me. What are you congratulating me on? My country’s on fire, and you come to congratulate me?”
As you can see, this is the kind of local story — it ran on the Metro front — that quite naturally pulls in a variety of voices from Egypt and from other nations and cultures in and around the Middle East. It’s like a sports bar in the Washington, D.C., area that caters to Green Bay Packer fans. It’s a point of contact, a bridge back to the old country.
As you would expect, this cafe appeals both to Muslims from Egypt and to Copts. This leads us to the only snippet of this fine story that gave me pause — a grammatical pause.
Read this carefully:
Although no Egyptians at the cafe expressed sympathy for longtime President Hosni Mubarak, many said they feared that the instability could bring harder times for the country. Coptic Christians said their families are planning to leave if Islamists take control of the government. Muslims, too, said they were concerned about that possibility.
Once again, it’s crucial for journalists to stress that Muslims in Egypt do not fall into one simple camp. Clarity is essential.
So what about that paragraph? Note that the Copts (I would ask, “All of them?”) say that their families back home are planning to leave Egypt if Islamists take over. Then we are told that, at this cafe, “Muslims, too, said they were concerned about that possibility.”
OK, I’ll ask: This surprisingly united crowd of Muslims are concerned about WHAT possibility?
The way this is set up, this unusually united group of Muslims are either concerned (a) about the possibility that Islamists could take over, or (b) they were concerned that the Copts could be forced to flee Egypt, or (c) that one thing could lead to another so that both things happened. So how are we supposed to read that? There is no way, grammatically, to tell precisely what is being said and this is a very important human-rights issue.
Meanwhile, I do find it hard to believe that there is total agreement among Muslims in the greater DC area over those issues or even total agreement between Muslims who frequent this cafe. Total agreement on such sensitive and culture-shaping decisions and events? Really?
And one more thing. Were readers ever told whether the folks who operate the cafe are Coptic Christians or Muslims? That might subtly affect the balance of who frequents the establishment, especially among Muslims. For example, is the food halal?