Balancing Jamie and Jamilah: A Review of “Ten Things I Hate About Me”

I was excited when the book Does My Head Look Big in This? came out a few years ago (see Melinda’s MMW review of it here.) In that book, author Randa Abdel-Fattah tells the story of Amal, a young Australian Muslim woman who decides to wear hijab and navigates the challenges of expressing her identity as an Australian Muslim.  Books about young Muslims in the West (a political and not geographic definition, obviously, given that I’m including Australia) aren’t exactly common, so it’s always exciting when these things do come up.

Abdel-Fattahs book. Image via Amazon.

Abdel-Fattah's book. Image via Amazon.

Abdel-Fattah’s second book is Ten Things I Hate About Me. Unlike Amal, Jamilah, the protagonist of this book, works hard to keep her Australian identity separate from her Lebanese-Muslim identity. At school, she is Jamie, and with her bleached hair and coloured contacts–no one knows that she is Arab or Muslim. The novel takes us through the stress and anxiety that Jamilah faces in keeping her culture and religion hidden, and her eventual path towards finding a sense of comfort to be able to express all elements of her identity.

I’ll say right now that this book is not an especially amazing literary work. The plot is interesting but somewhat predictable. (Fair warning: there are some minor spoilers ahead, but nothing that you wouldn’t have guessed yourself while reading the book.) A lot of the characters are fairly one-dimensional and seem to be there just to make a point: Jamilah’s father immigrated to Australia from Lebanon and has a Ph.D., but works as a taxi driver; her sister Shereen wears hijab (often in the form of scarves decorated with political slogans) and spends all her time out at political rallies and other activities related to social justice. (A religious woman in a scarf who’s really active and vocal? Amazing!) I guess it’s useful to have these characters there as a way of challenging some of the stereotypes that readers may have, but as Melinda wrote about in relation to Does My Head Look Big in This?, sometimes it felt as if the novel was banging us over the head with its attempts to challenge stereotypes. I would have liked to see some of these characters be a bit more subtle and complex.

That said, the novel still raised a lot of themes that are worthy of discussion and reflection. The story begins with a conversation about the anti-Arab riots that happened on Sydney beaches in December 2005, with one of Jamilah’s classmates (himself a Muslim of Arab background) talking about the injuries he received while fighting against the racist mobs.  Some students are supportive of him, while others taunt him, suggesting that the people rioting were right; one student, Peter, complains that “Man, you ethnics and Asians are always complaining. [...] Oh, help me! I’m a victim of racism. The white people are out to get me. Get over yourselves!”  These racist remarks (complicated by the fact that Peter is one of the most popular guys in the school and spends a lot of the book flirting with Jamilah) continue throughout the story.  I appreciated that Abdel-Fattah didn’t hold back on describing the racism that Jamilah was facing: it’s not simply a story of multiculturalism where everyone is happy and things like racism are an exception to the harmonious norm, but rather a more raw (and, I would argue, more truthful) portrayal of some of the ugly racism that does exist in Western societies.  There is also an argument made about Muslims and Arabs being held accountable for the actions of other people from their communities in ways that other groups aren’t: in one conversation with her aunt, Jamilah argues that

“When those teenage boys gang-raped girls in Sydney, it was the boys’ Lebanese-Muslim background that was put on trial. I went to school and I watched Peter Clarkson cross-examine Ahmed for a crime he did not commit. I read headlines describing the crimes as ‘Middle Eastern rape.’ I’ve never heard of Anglo burglary or Caucasian murder. If an Anglo-Australian commits a crime, the only descriptions we get are the colour of his clothes and hair.”

Along with this is a really honest portrayal of the effect that racism has on Jamilah.  To explain why she hides her background at school, she says:

“I don’t have the courage to be up-front about who I am. I’d rather not deal with people wondering if I keep a picture of Osama bin Laden in the shape of a love heart under my pillow. Call me crazy, but I’m also not particularly excited about the prospect of having to stand accused every time somebody who happens to be of Lebanese background commits a crime.”

This silence, however, takes its toll.  When she later talks about another moment where Ahmed stands up against racist comments, she reflects that “The same prejudice and bigotry that silences me, vocalizes him. And even though my silence protects me, I’m the one walking with my head down.”  When the aforementioned Peter tells Jamilah (or, perhaps more accurately, Jamie) that he likes that she is not self-absorbed, she thinks to herself, “”News bulletin: I’m not obsessed with the sound of my own voice because I don’t have a voice. I’m stifling it beneath layers of deceit and shame.”  Jamilah’s sense of vulnerability and shame is palpable throughout the novel, and conveys a strong message about the personal impact of racism.

Although my own background is very different from Jamilah’s, there were several moments where I felt that I could really identify with her struggles to juggle several elements of her identity that are so often portrayed as exclusive to each other. Even when it’s not about actually hiding our identities, the fact of belonging to multiple communities that are often understood as separate can be complicated and difficult to handle. The extent that Jamilah goes through to keep some aspects of her identity hidden might seem a bit extreme, but the idea of downplaying certain parts of our identity in certain spaces definitely resonates. Add in the social pressure of high school (which, actually, I did find a bit exaggerated in this novel, but it’s relevant nonetheless) and the need to fit in becomes even more intense. As our protagonist says,

“The Jamilah in me longs to be respected for who she is, not tolerated and put up with like some bad odour or annoying houseguest. But it takes guts to command that respect and deal with people’s judgements. Being Jamie at school shelters me from confronting all that.”

Her confusion about how to understand her multiple identities comes out in several places throughout the book. I like the way she illustrates the juggling metaphor here:

“All I want is to fit in and be accepted as an Aussie. But I don’t know how to do that when I’m juggling my Lebanese and Muslim background at the same time. It’s not like juggling an orange, and apple, and a banana. They’re all fruit and all fruits are pretty much equal, right? But the way I see it, juggling Aussie and Lebanese and Muslim is like juggling a couch, a mailbox, and a tray of muffins. Completely and utterly incongruous. How can I be three identities in one? It doesn’t work. They’re always at war with one another. If I want to go clubbing, the Muslim in me says it’s wrong and the Lebanese in me panics about bumping into somebody who knows somebody who knows my dad. If I want to go to a Lebanese wedding as the four hundredth guest, the Aussie in me will laugh and wonder why we’re not having civilized cocktails in a function room that seats a maximum of fifty people. if I want to fast during Ramadan, the Aussie in me will think I’m a masochist.
I can’t win.”

As the story progresses and Jamilah’s hold on the strict separation of her Australian and Lebanese/Muslim identities beings to weaken, she begins to realise the effect that this separation has had on her and on her relationships to the people around her.

“All I want to know is what place I have in this country I call home. It all comes down to emotional real estate. Finding your place, renovating it as you go along (a haircut here, a university degree there), and having neighbourly relations with other property owners.
So far, I’ve figured that dyeing my hair blonde, poking my eyes with contact lenses, and living a lie at school all guarantee me a share in the Australian property market. But I’m starting to realise how empty my bit of ‘place’ is. It’s got no soul. The cosmetics are fantastic and would look great on domain.com. But you can’t smell life. It tastes like stale cookies and sounds like socks on carpet.”

Cheesy? Well, yeah. And perhaps a bit simplistic, given the racism that was discussed earlier. It’s not as if just deciding to be yourself is necessarily going to make for an easy ride. But the sentiment is interesting, the idea that her attempts at self-preservation in fact become a form of self-destruction and self-silencing, and ultimately prove to be unsustainable.

The personal impact of this silence is also strongly felt at points.  Since not a single person at her school knows about her religious and cultural background, Jamilah’s friendships at school remain stunted and superficial, prompting this reflection:

“I don’t have a proper relationship with my so-called closest friend. We’re like the two sides of a train track, each comfortable in our parallel existence. We don’t intersect or touch each other. But sometimes you need to collide. You need to crash and make an impact just to feel your friendship is alive. To feel that it’s more than passing notes to each other in class and sharing fries at lunchtime. I don’t have any collision scars from this friendship. And as deliberate as that is, it’s not something I’m proud of.”

The novel also addresses family issues in interesting ways.  Jamilah’s father is very strict with her, and much less so with her brother, who goes out clubbing and drinking.  Jamilah’s frustration at this double standard is expressed throughout the book.  At the same time, she is very conscious of how this could be seen from the outside, and of not wanting to perpetuate a stereotype of Arab Muslim families as inherently sexist and oppressive.  When her friend Amy asks if she’ll be coming to a party, she pretends that she’ll be going, because

“I’m too embarrassed to tell her that my dad won’t let me go. I don’t want her to pigeonhole me as a poor, pitiful, repressed Lebanese girl. I know that my dad’s strictness is cultural and religious, but I also know it has a lot to do with my mother’s death as well, and the fact that he’s bringing us up alone. I don’t understand him. I don’t always agree with him. But I know that I’m not a stereotype and I’ll do everything in my power to protect myself from being seen as one, even if that means lying to my closest friend.”

The “I’m not a stereotype” idea comes up also in her conversations with “John,” an online friend to whom Jamilah has revealed more about her life than she has to her friends at school.  When she mentions that she would be “dead meat” if she ever had a boyfriend (and, more importantly, if her father found out), he responds by asking “Are you serious? Like those honour killings you hear about?”  Jamilah’s frustrated response is to tell him, “No, you space cadet. Sheesh, this is why I hate opening up to people about my family! Can’t I be metaphorical without having my dad equated to a Taliban warlord?”

Okay, so the family stuff isn’t exactly subtle.  The book is really clearly trying to make a point that families can be conservative and strict without filling the kinds of stereotypes that non-Muslims might expect.  Although the lack of subtlety doesn’t make for amazing literature, I do have to say that the point is a good one, and it’s nice to see something that tackles these stereotypes head-on.  Moreover, Jamilah is ultimately able to convince her dad to make small concessions: after some persuasion, she is able to get a part-time job, and after much persuasion, she is even able to go to her school’s formal.  I think these changes speak louder than the direct points that she makes, since they demonstrate that her family’s rules are not carved in stone, and that restrictions can be resisted from within, without requiring some kind of saviour from the outside.  I’m hoping that readers will understand that, by extension, other cultural rules (and resistance to them) can be equally dynamic, even when they seem monolithic and repressive from the outside.

Religion plays a fairly minor role in the story; Jamilah identifies as Muslim, but this isn’t the focus of the novel (this is actually pretty refreshing – someone can be Muslim while also having lots of other dimensions to her life!  Who knew?)  Various family members demonstrate different levels of religiosity, which is presented as something normal.  Even the hijab is – shockingly – not a major issue.  Jamilah’s sister wears it, but it is talked about more as a fashion and political statement than a religious one (although it is acknowledged as both.)  There are a few more direct conversations about religion (again with obvious points that the author wanted to convey, like when Jamilah’s aunt argues that “The Koran has been manipulated and abused to exploit women”), but it was nice to see a story about a Muslim girl that didn’t only revolve around the fact that she was Muslim.

I wasn’t thrilled with the cover of the book (pictured above.)  The cover features a strip of photos of a girl, alternatively wearing hijab and not wearing it.  This annoys me, because although a lot of the book is about Jamilah trying to balance her Muslim-Arab cultural-religious identity with her Australian identity, she never talks about wearing a headscarf.  Her Lebanese culture is talked about in terms of music and food, but not at all in terms of hijab, and it’s annoying to see that on the cover as the representative picture of Jamilah’s Lebanese/Muslimness.  Moreover, what does this say about the picture where she’s not wearing hijab?  Is that the picture where she’s “Australian”?  Can’t she have her head uncovered and still be seen as Lebanese and Muslim as well as Australian?  If the whole point of the book is to demonstrate that these identities shouldn’t be mutually exclusive of one another, it seems problematic that there is one way to “look” Arab and another way to “look” Australian.

Overall, while it was often trying too hard to make its points, this book was an entertaining read, and an interesting look into the life of a girl trying to balance her cultures and religion, to cope with the racism and sexism that she faces, and to find a space where she feels at home.

  • Melinda

    Great post! I really enjoyed reading your analysis, even though I haven’t read the book.

    About the cover — I’m guessing they went with hijab to make the contrast more “extreme.” Here‘s an earlier cover, with no hijab.

  • Zahra

    So good to see this review. I read and enjoyed this book about a month ago, and I agree that it’s overwritten but entertaining.

    I’m curious what you thought of the ending–specifically how the love interest is treated. I am of two or three minds about Jamila’s decision.

  • Krista

    @ Melinda: Thanks! You should read the book, I’d love to hear your thoughts on it too.

    That’s so interesting about the other cover. It’s so different! It’s not exactly how I pictured the character, but it’s way more applicable to the story, I think.

    @ Zahra: It’s good to hear from someone else who read the book!

    I also had mixed thoughts on the ending. (To anyone who hasn’t read the book and wants it to be a surprise, you might want to stop reading here.)

    For those who haven’t read it and don’t care about the surprise, basically what Zahra’s talking about is how at the end, the love interest, Timothy, is a guy who Jamilah has gotten to know (and to whom she inadvertently revealed a lot more about her life than she had to anyone else at her school.) At the end of the book, they’re at the school formal, and Timothy kisses her. She’s clear that she likes him, but tells him that she can’t be in a relationship with him, because she has just made some breakthroughs with her dad, and doesn’t want to be going behind his back at this point.

    I liked the complexity of this ending. It wasn’t entirely “and they all lived happily ever after,” with the girl getting the guy and so on, and although much about the ending was sappy and predictable, this part added a more realistic and bittersweet dimension to it. I also liked the way that it was explained, that it wasn’t just “my religion/culture doesn’t let me date,” but rather about wanting to stop having to hide things about herself and to maintain a trusting relationship with her father (and I thought that part was articulated in a very respectful way, rather than just positioning her father as some kind of draconian bad guy.)

    On the other hand, it makes me think of a similar scene in the author’s other book (Does My Head Look Big in This?), where the girl’s reaction is very much like Jamilah’s here, and I wonder to what degree Muslim girls who *do* date are going to feel judged or excluded by both of these books. I don’t mean to get into a conversation on whether Muslims can or can’t date, that’s not the issue, but both of these books close off the possibility of even venturing into that territory. Again, this is not to say that it’s right or wrong, but just that some Muslim girls DO end up dating, and it would be interesting to see a story of a girl trying to negotiate that. But that doesn’t mean that this was the wrong ending for this book. I think it was probably a pretty good ending for this particular story.

    What did you think, Zahra (and anyone else who read it)?

  • Zahra

    Thanks for your comments, Krista!

    I also found a lot to like in this book–especially the way it parallels Jamilah hiding her heritage with her father bowing to gossip within the Lebanese-Australian community. They both care too much what other people think of them, and make similar journeys toward their fundamental values.

    I also very much liked the way divorce was treated in Jamilah’s world, as something very common (it affects three different families, including the Arabic teacher) but still retaining some stigma in both Muslim & non-Muslim contexts. This rang true for me, personally. And I liked the sense that the dad’s strictness came mostly from his status as a single father.

    (This is spoiler space for anyone who doesn’t want to know the ending.)

    I was very surprised when Jamilah turned Timothy down. The book is, as you mention, very full of plot, and I saw every event coming (the dad’s love interest, the sister’s arrest, etc.) except this one. Most of the story taps into a very common script in popular fiction–girl choosing between bad boy (the racist) and good boy (Timothy)–but then suddenly, at the end, it swaps scripts! It felt to me like an authorial intrusion.

    I think you’re right in the complexity it brings to the end, and I did very much like the sense it gives us that Jamilah has not only learned her lesson, but is changing her actions because of it. And I agree that it highlights how she values her changing relationship with her dad.

    But I also had trouble believing that Jamilah, who has just spent the entire book very much desiring male attention, could turn that sharp of a corner. (Especially when Timothy has been wearing a sign labeled “ideal boyfriend” for the whole book.) So I wasn’t sure about the decision to just be friends.

    I would also be interested in reading a story about a Muslim girl who did date. But you’re right; that’s a different book.

  • Krista

    Hmm, interesting. I actually wasn’t that surprised when she said no to Timothy. Partly because, given the rules that her dad had laid out for her, it seems like any kind of relationship would have been way outside of the boundaries of what she could envision herself doing. And also because, although we as the readers could see the “ideal boyfriend” sign that Timothy was wearing (that’s a great image, LOL), he’s not exactly constructed as the desirable boyfriend by any of his peers, and Jamilah seemed to face a lot of pressure through the book to NOT show an interest in him (let alone *have* any interest, of course.) So, although Jamilah was clearly attracted to him, I think she was already facing a combination of barriers from her family and from some of her classmates that already would have meant that she wouldn’t have thought seriously about being in a relationship with him.

    Also, in terms of her “desiring male attention” throughout the book – I guess I read that differently. I think it was a specific kind of male attention that she was desiring, specifically Peter’s attention, not so much because of his maleness (although of course that was a factor), but largely also because of his popularity. I don’t think that the attention that she desired (or that she would have received) from Timothy was the same as the desire for popularity that she expressed in relation to the attention she got from Peter. And once she had made things right with Amy and with her family, she didn’t need that same kind of attention anymore.

    Yes, I realise I’m trying to see into the mind of a fictional character ;)

    Have you read Does My Head Look Big in This? I think I was more surprised in that one that she didn’t go for the guy, because the love interest was a bigger part of the story than in 10 Things (where Jamilah’s relationship with Timothy changes a few times through the book, and is complicated also by Peter’s presence.) Maybe it was also from having seen Amal’s decision in that book that made me less surprised when Jamilah turned Timothy down in this one.

  • Zahra

    I haven’t read Does My Head Look Big in This? yet; you’re probably right that it would have changed my expectations. My surprise came from the sense that the book was following a formula, and then suddenly abandoning it; maybe Abdel-Fattah is trying to create her own formula. (Or at least ring a particular Muslim change on an existing one.)

    I took the peer disapproval of Timothy to be comparable to the peer disapproval of being Muslim or Lebanese; Timothy is the book’s biggest symbol of being true to yourself and not defined by other peoples’ expectations. Since Jamilah’s journey is about just that, I’d hate to think that that peer pressure played into her decision not to see him. (I did think it was all about the father.)

    I can see your point about her interest in Peter being an interest in popularity/acceptance by mainstream white Australia rather than in him or male attention. But for me the point was complicated by the fact that Jamilah shows no interest whatsoever in befriending or hanging out with popular girls; I don’t think there even are any in the book. (There is Laura, the friend who becomes popular by dating a popular guy, but she has no social status except as his appendage.)

    Most YA books about popularity focus on female-female relationships, so I noticed the absence; it gave Jamilah’s interest in Peter a different cast. (In my experience, girls whose interest in guys is motivated by status or insecurity rather than actual attraction do tend to be more boy-crazy. Maybe that’s just me.)

    The more I think about it, the more popularity seems to equal male attention in Jamilah’s world; it’s something only men can confer. That’s true among Jamilah’s father’s friends as well, where it’s the male gossip who polices everyone’s in-group or out-group status.

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  • http://eternityveil.blogspot.com/ Julianne

    I already commented on the crosspost at Feminist Review, but then I came over here to see if anyone else had comments.

    RE. The “earlier” cover Melinda refers to – that’s actually the paperback cover, at least for the UK edition, and that’s the one I read. That’s just one side of the book in the picture. The back cover has an image, just as large, of a girl wearing hijab.

  • Krista

    @ Julianne: Thanks for stopping by here! (I also just responded to your comment on Feminist Review.) That’s interesting about the different cover (and annoying that there’s still a headscarf involved!)

    @ Zahra: Thanks for sharing all those reflections. I think you make a really good point about popularity being so tied to male attention. There is a pretty striking absence of major female popular characters, which seems unusual. Interesting…

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  • omi

    Actually, I previously ordered the edition you’ve linked to, and on the back cover, you see the same face in a purple hijab, you wouldn’t be able to tell from that picture because it’s just a picture of the front cover.

  • omi

    I’ve read the book as well- it wasn’t bad. I loved Shereen’s character as a hijabi activist. I agree with the review it was pretty predictable. You can probably tell just by reading the summary she’s gonna end up “coming out” (I hope that doesn’t sound too odd) out as an Australian-Arab Muslim and “be herself” or something like that.

  • sarah

    i thought the book was gud cos i was able to realise that people have it tougher than me. I thought my dad was stricked, obviously not!!

  • Deena

    I just like this book it tell us about how the family issues and culture. Jamilah is type of young teens who goes 2 different country coz it tell us bowt who she is?

  • rahimat

    I really like this book

  • Stacey.blonde.doll

    Seriously if her dad is strict why does he let her wear contacts and dye her hair


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