Very nice. I like that it reads almost as a haiku.
God loves you so very much and He is using you to reach those who may never visit the established church. Do not feel forgotten or out of step. We all are so very different and respond to different sounds of the same calling/voice – God loves us. Be blessed!
That was good.
“It is enough for me that
I am found in your death.”
Steve, I wonder if your version really is the better one. Isn’t the fact that we were created by God, by his breathing into us, the positive creative act at the beginning? There was supposedly perfection in the Garden of Eden, it was sinless. To me, that would be the best.
For me, looking at it all mythically in the first place anyway. Just some food for thought.
“Ruach” is good. And only the Spirit will make Christ plain to us. It all works together.