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I’m sorry to say that no recording was made of Royal Skousen’s lecture this past Saturday night on “Textual Criticism and the Book of Mormon,” apparently as the result of an unfortunate misunderstanding. (I certainly don’t understand what happened!) I had been out of the country until the night before and I had been without WiFi during the last several days of that absence, and I had assumed that all was under control. Plainly, it wasn’t. Moreover, it seems that we won’t be doing anything in the near term to remedy the defect. Royal Skousen and Stanford Carmack were just in my home a few minutes ago, and I think that we’ll simply move on from where we are. There may be another presentation in January or February and, very likely, a somewhat larger event in April or May to mark the overall culmination of the Book of Mormon Critical Text project.
I really regret our failure to produce a recording of Royal Skousen’s remarks on Saturday evening at Utah Valley University. His lecture was very good — so good, in fact, that I never even came close to dozing off during it despite severe jet lag. There was a respectable audience in attendance, but I would have preferred more to have been able to hear it and I would like there to have been a recorded public record to which people might refer.
Here, though, are the notes that I took during the lecture. I realize that they don’t even remotely compensate for not hearing the actual presentation and that they may not even be comprehensible, precisely accurate, or reflective of its actual structure and major themes. (I do my best! Even when seriously jet-lagged.) But, for whatever they’re worth, here they are:
Conjectural Emendations
seemingly rare because difficult to identify
if history of text is known, however, very common
RS has checked French, German, and Finnish translations of the Book of Mormon — surprising how commonly the translators’ independent conjectural emendation agree with each other and with RS’s own
Copyists tend to make the text more difficult, and shorter
Editors tend to make the text easier, and longer (especially in scripture and with such iconic figures as Shakespeare; nobody wants to risk omitting precious words of the Bard or or scripture, so everything tends to be included)
Copyists dominate early transmission of a text, and are more naïve
Editors dominate later transmission of a text, and are more conscious or deliberate
Discussion of what makes a change equivalent in difficulty to the previous text, or or more difficult, or easier
His rules work, says RS, because Book of Mormon is very long (ca. 270,000 words) and extraordinarily repetitive in its phraseology
- Virtually every occurring phrase or word can also be found elsewhere in the text.
- This is not so for the Bible, which isn’t actually a single book but, rather, a collection of various books by different authors from widely different periods [dcp: English word Bible comes from Koine Greek τὰ βιβλία, tà biblía, ‘the books’]
Computerized Collation
Yale text is first product of the Computerized Collation
WordCruncher version of Computerized Collation
RS repeats claim (with Stanford Carmack sitting on the front row, right before him) that (especially) the original dictated text of the Book of Mormon reflects strong links to Early Modern English (EModE). The evidence for this is laid out most fully in his books on The History of the Text of the Book of Mormon, The Nature of the Original Language (Parts 3–4) and The History of the Text of the Book of Mormon, The King James Quotations in the Book of Mormon (Part 5).
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RS announces the imminent release of Volume 5 of his Critical Text project
Third edition of Analysis of Textual Variants linked to the WordCruncher version of the Computerized Collation
- This will give the whole picture of the textual state
- It remedies two great defects of usual critical apparatuses
- (1) all of the variants, not merely a selection
- (2) gives arguments (alone among all of the critical text projects in the whole world)
On behalf of John Carmack, RS announces Carmack’s grammatically tagged version of the Original Text of the Book of Mormon (which will, among other things, give examples of EModE)
Overall theme of RS’s remarks, as he himself sees them: What can the Book of Mormon teach us about textual criticism, rather than the usual question of what textual criticism can teach us about the Book of Mormon. (“Book of Mormon is a blessing for textual criticism.”)
Anybody who is interested in being notified of the release of the grammatically tagged version of the Original Text and/or the Computerized Collation should go to wordcruncher.com/skousen and register on the list there.

I actually miss him; he was an interesting voice and a superb writer.
But now it’s time to share a few little horrors that recently tumbled out of the Christopher Hitchens Memorial “How Religion Poisons Everything” File©:
“Church donates $150,000 in relief materials to victims of Benue Flood: Governor lauds gesture”