“BETTER AT IT”: THE HUMAN CONDITION. Part two of the story with the aliens. Veers briefly into explicit territory, so you know. …The major issue here is that I don’t tell you who’s speaking. Yell at me about that if you think it sucks. Also, there’s no plot, but that almost certainly isn’t going to change. Also-also, please feel free to yowl about anything else you like or (especially) dislike about the story so far. I post these rough drafts mostly to make myself write, but also because I’ve received consistently fantastic and helpful comments from readers. Be part of the commenting goodness! …Part three (last part) will be up very soon–sometime in the next four days.

Click here to read the very short story so far; here to read the second segment.