“THROUGH THE YEARS WE ALL WILL BE TOGETHER”: SIX FOR THE SIX THAT NEVER GOT FIXED. Second-to-last section of the depressing Christmas story. I’m apologizing in advance for the amazingly awful structure of this story. It should not even stand up without skyhooks. When I revise, I will fix the horrible maldistribution of character development, a.k.a. lumps of exposition in everyone’s stockings! I do still think this story is worth the trouble it would take to save.

Anyway, in this section we do learn more about Diep, especially. Click here to read from the beginning, or here for the newest segment.

Again, you know, I apologize for this story. It will suck a lot less once this rough draft has been scraped and sanded. (Especially if you help me by sending me intelligent, ferocious criticism!)