“KISSABLE PICTURES”: THE TIDE IS HIGH, BUT I’M HOLDING ON. In which there’s less rock, more talk.

The chronology here is weird. The Virginia Beach scene in this episode takes place before the Manassas concert scene in the prior installment. I’m not sure if or how I’ll rearrange it in the final draft.

As is fast becoming traditional for this story, the prose does what it has to do but nothing more. No, I’m not satisfied. I’ll fix it in post….

Anyway, in this installment we learn what is up with the whole weird sibling shtik; and our music journalist discovers one sister and lies to another. Click here for the latest section, here to read the whole thing from the beginning.